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2001年6月英语四级作文真题:给同学写关于度假的信件

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:43浏览次数:1410
要求:
 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the weeklong holiday. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions (given in Chinese) below:
  1.表示欢迎
  2.提出度假安排建议
  3.提醒应注意的事项
  A Letter to A Schoolmate; June 23, 2001; Dear Xiao Wang; Yours, Zhang Ying
用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Dear Xiao Wang, You are going to visit me during the week long holiday. I am very happy when I know this news. Wecome you to my home. I have made a scheduling. Please review below these project. First, we will climb a mountain where it is lay behind my home. There are a great deal of flower and grass. And my father had plant a lot of apple tree on the mountain, so you could pick and eat some apples, there are free. Second, we will boat and fish in a big pool where they are in our orchard. Six month ago, my mother puts a great number of fish into this pool. Now I think that these fish are bigger and we could fish them. I have a question to ask you."Could you swim in a pool?" Third, I konw that you like play football, so we will play football on the grass. Although we have these projects, we must pay attention to safety. My father is afraid we will fall into the pool. If you receive my advice, please reply me as soon as possible. Best regards Yours Zhang Ying

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