文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Dear Xiao Wang, You are going to visit me during the week long holiday. I am very happy when I know this news. Wecome you to my home. I have made a scheduling. Please review below these project. First, we will climb a mountain where it is lay behind my home. There are a great deal of flower and grass. And my father had plant a lot of apple tree on the mountain, so you could pick and eat some apples, there are free. Second, we will boat and fish in a big pool where they are in our orchard. Six month ago, my mother puts a great number of fish into this pool. Now I think that these fish are bigger and we could fish them. I have a question to ask you."Could you swim in a pool?" Third, I konw that you like play football, so we will play football on the grass. Although we have these projects, we must pay attention to safety. My father is afraid we will fall into the pool. If you receive my advice, please reply me as soon as possible. Best regards Yours Zhang Ying
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