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accroding to the title we can obviously find out that sometimes people always do things without thinking carefully . as we all know, people should grow up, no one can stay young to do things like a child.the time when we grow up ,we should realizae that we must learn to think before we do.while we see one thing or we hear one thing ,we should think it carefully instead of making a decision right away .only this can let us find the real question so that we can easily find the key to the question.but nowadays ,doing things without thinking become a normal phonomen ,it is important for people to clam down to think what should we do if we meet things another time . as far as i am concerned ,thingking carefully before doing is a good habit for all students .especially when we graduated from school ,it is really plays a important role in our life.
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