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Life is short,please use it meaningfully. Less greedy,more giving. The pain people feel usually comes from their hearts,greedy hearts.The more you want to obsess,the more unhappiness come to you,because you'll never get enough.From now on,please spend more time on giving,maybe a smile to people passing by,maybe a little favour to people totally strange.Someday,you'll find the life is more wonderful through eyes of people you helped or treated nicely. Less hurry,more enjoyment. The lack of life are never beauties,but the eyes which find them.People pass by the green views on their way to work without pay any attention everyday.People pretend not to see other ones beside them when on the bus or train just because they think they have no extra time for this.From now on,please take a smile on your face and give it to people around you,and pleasse pay some attention on the grass and flowers beside the road and on the every little beauty in your life.