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GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

发布时间:2013-07-19 16:34浏览次数:8491
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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.  “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”

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单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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i are girl . he are man. she come from eastern american. she wants to go to shool to have a good look to wait he mam and the another things she want to speak to her mother.but it it very important thing . hello, everyone. Today I'm very happy to be here to share with you something about ecommerce in china. First of all, I want to mention a word. It comes from Meg Whitman, former CEO of E-bay. She said, whoevre wins china, will win the world. So, today, AS a developing country, china has been radiply develops ecommerce in recent years.

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