能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
My friend is Lilei,he is happliess for help,outsiding and his favourite is very hign.he likes play basketball,listen to music and look at book,He is very prettey for his learn,he is very hardworking and usually help me for learning. I wish you happy everyday,can be have good school,thanks for help me in last year.