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When we have choices or source in our hands it is clever not to put them on one thing just as the say goes:"It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket." How say that?On one hand,we can forcast little the things which will happen in which time and what it bring to us that whether we can deal with or hold. Meanwhile,"East is lighting or west is lighting."There is not only one way we can do we wants.On the other hand,it is not only save but also benificial that not to put all eggs in one basket.Such as in stock market,if you put all our money in stock market,I can't say that you will catch a big proccess,on the countrary,you may be loss all your money. In a word,be carefull and smart to face choices or sources in our hand,and not put all eggs in one basket.