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2002年1月英语四级作文真题:就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:48浏览次数:1845
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 100 words ,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below. 
  假设你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
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评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富,学术词汇使用要加强;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Dear President Wang, I am happy to send a letter to you. I am introduce that my name is Li Ming. I am a freshman and from class two grade one. I like university life and our school, but I don't like the canteen service on campus. The service include meal quility, price, condition and so on. I know that this is my feeling, but I still have something to tell you and holp that the canteen will correct action. Please review below my advice. First of all, there is bug or hair in a meal. I hope worker of the canteen must clear wash the rice, fish, meat and vegetable. Second,we come from a general family. We can pay for one meal, but we couldn't afford to a month meal fee. So could you make down the meal fee? At last, we have a meal in a dirty room where dirty water on the floor. Sometime we can't find a seat whether we are late. If you arrange for some workers clean the floor and add some seats in the room, we will be happy. And you arrange for one man to check the canteen service. Your student Li Ming

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