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Sometimes,we may have more and more eggs that is a sample of some vaulable things,and we won't put all eggs together because if something bad happened we will have a large loss. in our real life. one may invest all money he have in buying something with its value more in the near future only for better interest. it means we make a bet with the world. if we won the brilliant future is coming to me, on the contary everything we have will goes flying .the risk is too large to give up the try for a normal people .after all ,in any place we stilll have a chance to make a better choice. we can divide assets we have into small daparts that we can use it for more invest .in cast of one invest failure we can still get the pay in other invest.the saying that it is unwise to put all eggs in the same basket can go well in other sides of life.it can be understood that we should just go for a aim that we won't achieve .just a turn we may gain a more wonderful word.
