高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I used to live in hometown where was arounded by green tree;in river,some fishes played with each other;the house which was so simple and crude,the street which was so narrow that many people couldn't pass by;people lived in hometown who was work tired and daily life was poverty. Now,big or small car which is pass by the street quickly;the industry development which let environment pollution;the tree reduce and the fish disappear;governance pollution which is so urgent now.