题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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1.对这种做法有人表示支持作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Should parents send their kids to art classes? As parents' aspects,each one wants their children get some achievements at art and cultivates them when they were young.So does the art classes become so popular.However,there are a variety of children give their interests up during a period of learning.Can this phenomenon proof that these children do not have any talents at arts? The answer is definitely no.Some parents think their children will become more and more excellent at arts as long as they take them to the art classes,which leads parents spent much time and money.Instead,they may not achieve the results equally.This is not the parents' and their kids' mistakes and they all have good will at first,but they ignore an important whether their children want to learn actually. From my view,just like someone say,interest is the best teacher of a child.Indeed,each parent should realize and foster their child's interest instead of froce them enter the classes.If their child like what he do truly,they can do it with their self-conscious.
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