2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Judging from the picture,Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.On the other,education is the potential benefit. From the picture,we can see the lower education has the great market.But they earn less than that who have lots of education.According to the developing of the modern society more and more people go for the high salary.So parents are hoping that their children have good education.Such as going abroad for high education.Though the high education become large,the unemployment rate is low.What's more the rate of out of work also become high. As everyone knows,human being is a magical animal.They usually like to go for the easier job.So lots of people have great education but not have great job.