题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
要求
1.对这种做法有人表示支持作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Should parents send their kids to art classes? As parents' aspects,each one wants their children get some achievements at art and cultivates them when they were young.So does the art classes become so popular.However, a variety of children give their interests up during a period of learning.Can this phenomenon proof that these children do not have any talents in the direction of arts? The answer is definitely no.Some parents suppose that their children will become more and more excellent at arts as long as they take them to the art classes,which leads parents spent much time and money.Instead,they may not achieve the results equally.This is not the parents' and their kids' mistakes and they all have good will at first,but they ignore an important whether their children intend to acquire actually. From my view,just like someone say,interest is the best teacher of a child.Indeed,each parent should realize the significant of fostering their child's interest,instead of froce them enter the classes.If their children like what they do truly,they can do it with their self-conscious.
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