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字数：300 满分：100分
可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
we know that our parents lernning money hard.so we should be careful with our moeny. we collect all kinds of coupons; we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. so,we should think about how can we seave more money.at first,we must reconguenace that we should be careful with our money;then,we take all kinds of ways to seave our money. 1,do not bay anything we do not need,do not buy too many things,enough is engugh. 2,when we go shopping we should take a bag rather buy a new one. 3,do not take too much money,no money with you is batter. 4,do not conpuer with others,do not admair others.
