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Different people have diferent attitute on that human immediately make conclusion.But for me,it is unwise for us to decide quickly.And i have many fact things to improve my opinon. Firstly,we should consider every aspects carefully.Sometimes we will lose many important things which lead to terrible result.Sometimes we do not care about others idear so that other human will feel upset.Secondly,we make decision by other things and other people,becase we are too young to do that.we are not enough old for us and easy affect by others.Thirdly,there is a old saying which is seeing by myself is not truth.i believe that many people has pratices throught this saying. In a word,making conclution quickly is a terrible things
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