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It is well- known that the westerners attach great importance to privacy. They areegocentric and take it for granted that their individual interests cannot be invaded at anytime. For example, in the west, when visit someone, we need to make an appointment withhim, it is impolite to make a sudden visit. Recent yeas the people of our country especially businessmen or politicians began to make an appointment before they are going to visit someone, but relatively speaking, we do not take it too seriously. There is a proverbwhich seems give a clear explanation of the importance of privacy. "A man's home ishis castle". It means that the home is significant and personal to him, and he willnever suffer it to be violated. The western people may not like these questions such as age, income, marriage and other individual matters. They are disincline to talk about these topics with others, because these issues are related to the personal circumstance,which are regarded as their own business. When communicating with westerners, we should pay attention to avoid askingprivate information like salary, marriage, love, phone mumber, weight and so forth. Thesebehaviors are the interference. But as for Chinese people, it is an universal phenomenon that people talk about income, civil state, age and so on. The relationship amongpeople become close because of the traditional living habitudes. Privacy in verbalbehaviors here I will introduce includes greeting, income and age. Greeting isan automatic reaction in daily life. When Chinese meet together, the commontopics usually involve much personal information such as work, family, marriage, salary,age and ancestral home to show concern and friendliness. For instance, Chinese peopleare used to ask “whereare you going?” or “what are you doing?”. Actually, they don’t really concern about your private affairs, it is more out of habits. In western countries, you should avoid asking personal information like age, wage, marital status and lifestyle. Because westerners want to have their own private spaces and do not like tomention too much about themselves. What’s more, there are laws about privacy toprotect their rights of privacy. Foreigners usually start a conversation with “ how are you?”,“good morning ! ”, “what’s up?”. In greeting, they prefer to talk about weather, sports and so on. These topics are frequently used in many cases with no worry about whetherviolate the privacy of others or not.