2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细；连词使用偏少。

Nowadays,computer has been an indispensable part of modern life. but,every coin have two side. Computer bought us many convinence. we can send E-mail to friends that your friends receive it quickly. we can watch the movies in the internet that we can not go to the cinema. we can buy what you want in the internet, and we can conmmunicate with our long distance family. But when we chat with our friends in the internet. it will lead to we won't meet friends face to face. and when we buy something in the internet we always can't ensure the quolity of the goods.