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2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:22浏览次数:6151
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题目 Free admission to museums
要求
1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么?
2.也会带来一些问题
3.你的看法?
字数:120 满分:100分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。

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Nowadays,more and more museums are free to enter which makes a large number of people converged on the museums. However,what's the purpose of it?Of course,This may bring many potential problems that increase the governments' burden.First,many visitors always like painting and writing on the historical subjects which is difficult to deal with.Often that needs a lot of money and manpower to mend them.What's more,with the boosting of visitors due to the free tickets,so the surroundings nearby are destroyed heavily. In my point of view, Free admission to museums is a pretty good policy.Owing to it,many people can have free aeriform education.The most important is laws should be published to protect historical subjects from destroying.

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