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运用了丰富的复杂句；作者词汇量提升空间很大，学术词汇使用要加强，单词拼写要认真；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
dialects is not acceptable in public dialects exists many region in china，people use it to communicate with others，it is a traditional and regional language been a long history，but now with the development of society，all kinds of meeting are hold in our lives，so it is appropriate to use dialects in public places？as far as i am concerned，i think it is not appropriate to use dialects in public places。 fristly，if people use dialects in public places,it seems it is unpolite，others people maybe think you are talking about them or you are talking about something which
