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White is contrary to red, it is a basic color taboo in Chinese culture. It manifests the Chinese’s material and spirit disgust. In the traditional Chinese perspective, White makes people incline to think of solemn mourning, which stemmed from ancient times for color of superstition. White color in China has the meaning of death, lifeless performance and bad omen. When the people pass away, the relatives always wear white clothes and hit white long narrow flag at the funeral to mourn him or her. In addition, the psychological function of white is very interesting. It symbolizes reaction, foolish, failure, and vain action. For instance, the fool is called the “idiot”. It also indicates the commoners who have no fame and have little knowledge, and such persons are called “common man”. Under the western cultural backgroud, white symbolizes, purity, elegance and frank. When the young get married, the bride wears white wedding dress. This tradition begins from the Victoria Ages, and the snow-white wedding dress was the most popular at that time. Since Queen Victorian married her sweetheart in a beautiful white wedding dress, and then the white wedding dress become fashionable for a time. Even now, it remains the most popular for the brides, because it is a symbol of fidelity and purity. The meaning of white color is higher than any other kind of colors at this point, the westerners even associate the white with virginity. “white knight”, it refers to the winner of the politician or the business; “white lie”, it means the lie of goodwill which is said not to make people embarrassed; “a white day” is a lucky day; “days marked with a white stone”, it signifies the happy days of one’s life. In one western tale, one beautiful princess is called the Snow-white; she is the symbol of beauty, smart and purity. So it is clear that the Westerners consider the white as their favorite color and use its connotation in various aspects of life.