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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10532
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;从句数量稍显不足,注意增加从句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Black stands for strength and authority; it is known as a very formal, elegant, and prestigious color. The black color is the Emperor’s unique color of the clothes, and the common people are not allowed to wear black clothes. It also represents honesty and justice in China, and the honest and good men have the black faces to show their justice in the traditional Beijing Opera. What is more, the poets prefer to use the black to describe the healthy and the strong men. On the other hand, black stands for the evil omen in traditional Chinese culture. Besides, black also implies gloom, extreme anger, misfortune and so forth. According to western culture, the black color is the sign of the darkness. It stands for the the evil, the pain and the misfortune in Bible. In the classic ballet SWAN LAKE, the black swan symbolize the hatred or the enmity. In the figure of speech, using black always gives people a feeling of terror, there are some examples: black day (unlucky day); black and blue(;full of bruises); “the black art” (enchantment); a black look(an angry look; glare at somebody); black dog (unhappy); “black ingratitude” (a person who is ungrateful and leave one’s benefactor in the lurch); “in a black mood”(in low spirits); “a black villain”, (the hooligan); “black sheep”(evil member of the herd); “ a black letter day” is the ominous day for a person; “black money” is the illegal money which does not make a statement of duty”; “black words” is the unlucky words which can make others angry; “black-hear ted” means a malicious person; “black mail” usually means the kidnapper extorts money from victims etc. These expressions are all related to the evil, bad,indignant features in Western culture. A language reflects the development of a nation’s history and culture. The underlying meanings of color words may have great distinction in different cultures. They are shaped in the long-term development of the society. The colors bring us a beautiful and splendid world, and color words make it easier to express our feelings, make our expression more appropriate and vivid. Correctly understanding the deeper symbolic meaning of colors will be a great help for people in different cultures to communicate.

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