作者词汇量积累不错,学术词汇希望能用的更熟练,不过有些单词拼错了;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Westerners advocated individual idea, pursuit for individual freedom, manage torealize individual dream, with as little limitation and constriction from the mass as possible.This kind of thought has great influence on the their daily diet. They lay stress on theindependence of individual, therefore, from the beginning to the end they eat their ownshare of food. Even thought in the dinner time they also sitting around a table, each of them has his own share of dish and his own set of tableware. They do not interfereeach other in this way. It seems a little cold and cheerless , but it is very healthy and clean. What he want to eat and how to eat is decided by oneself, according tohis own need. The individual has the freedom to choose food, for instance, when yougo to a western restaurant and ask for a share of steak, the cook probably ask you suchquestions: would you like to fried steak or roasted steak, how long do you want yoursteak cooked etc. And after that the steak will be strictly prepared according toyour requirement. Besides, sauce and spice are usually put on the tables. It dependsson the consumers to decide whether to add the condiments or not. So does the beveragedrink? It’s the customer’s own business to drink much orlittle. Futhermore, whenhave a dinner, making sure the spout of the teapot is not facing anyone. It is impolite and offensive to let the spout of teapot face towards somebody and thespout should always be directed to where nobody is sitting, usually outward from the table. Don't beat your bowl with your chopsticks, this is not polite. Beggarstap on their bowls. Also, if the food is coming too slow in a restaurant, peoplewill tap their bowls. If you are in someone's home, it is considered a way of insulting the cook.