2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

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Nowadays,more and more museums are free to enter which makes a large number of people converged on the museums. However,what's the purpose of it?Of course,This may bring many potential problems that increase the governments' burden.First,many visitors always like painting and writing on the historical subjects which is difficult to deal with.Often that needs a lot of money and manpower to mend them.What's more,with the boosting of visitors,so the surroundings nearby are destroyed heavily. In my point of view, Free admission to museums is a pretty good policy.Owing to it,many people can have free aeriform education.The most important is laws should be published to protect historical subjects from destroying.