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Westerners advocate individual idea, pursuit for individual freedom, manage to to realize individual dream with as little limitation and constriction from the mass as possible.This idea has great influence on the their daily diet. They lay stress on the independence of individual, therefore, from the beginning to the end they eat their own share of food. Even in the dinner time they also sitting around a table, each of them has his own share of dish and his own set of tableware. They do not interfere each other in this way. It seems a little cold and cheerless, but it is very healthy and clean. What he want to eat and how to eat is decided by oneself, according tohis own need. The individual has the freedom to choose food, for instance, when yougo to a western restaurant and ask for a share of steak, the cook probably ask you suchquestions: would you like to fried steak or roasted steak, how long do you want yoursteak cooked etc. And after that the steak will be strictly prepared according toyour requirement. Besides, sauce and spice are usually put on the tables. It depends on the consumers whether to add the condiments or not. So does the beverage drink? It’s the customer’s own business to drink much or little. Furthermore, when having a dinner, make sure the spout of the teapot is not facing anyone. It is impolite and offensive to let the spout of teapot face towards somebody and the spout should always be directed to where nobody is sitting, usually outward from the table. Don't beat your bowl with your chopsticks, this is not polite. Beggar stap on their bowls. Also, if the food is coming too slow in a restaurant, people will tap their bowls. If you are in someone's home, it is considered a way of insulting the cook.