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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10534
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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Westerners advocate individual idea, pursuit for individual freedom, manage to to realize individual dream with as little limitation and constriction from the mass as possible.This idea has great influence on their daily diet. They lay stress on the independence of individual, therefore, from the beginning to the end they eat their own share of food. Even at dinner time they also sitting around a table, each of them has his own share of dish and his own set of tableware. They do not interfere each other in this way. It seems a little cold and cheerless, but it is very healthy and clean. What he want to eat and how to eat is decided by oneself, according tohis own need. The individual has the freedom to choose food, for instance, when you go to a western restaurant and ask for a share of steak, the cook probably ask you such questions: would you like to fried steak or roasted steak, how long do you want your steak cooked etc. And after that the steak will be strictly prepared according to your requirement. Besides, sauce and spice are usually put on the tables,and consumers can choose to whether add the condiment or not. So does the beverage drink? It’s the customer’s own business to drink much or little. Furthermore, when having a dinner, make sure the spout of the teapot is not facing anyone. It is impolite and offensive to let the spout of teapot face towards somebody and the spout should always be directed to where nobody is sitting, usually outward from the table. Don't beat your bowl with your chopsticks, this is not polite. Beggars tap on their bowls. Also, if the food is coming too slow in a restaurant, people will tap their bowls. If you are in someone's home, it is considered a way of insulting the cook.

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