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Next, the table manners is also quiet different. Bread plates are to the left of the main plate when you are eating in an American family, drinking glasses are to the right. Besides, dessert utensils are either put above the main plate or served with dessert. There are also some general behaviors need to be paid attention. Do not stare at anyone while he or she is eating. Never tilt back your chair while at the table, or at any other time. Do not play with food or table utensils. Chew with your mouth closed. Refrain from coughing, sneezing or blowing nose at the table. Do not make unbecoming noises while eating. Always tell the host before leaving the table. If urgent, ask the host to be excused, and go outside, apologize when returned. In some families, a prayer may be customary, and the guests should join in even if they do not follow the same religion or are not religious. Do not start eating until every person is served. At many formal occasions all diners will wait until the host lifts a fork or spoon. When you are eating in a Chinese family, these are mostly related to the use of chopsticks. In general, Chinese table manners are more informal, what would be considered impolite in other cultures such as talking with the mouth full may be admissible but better not to do so. Chopsticks must always be held in the correct manner. Chopsticks are traditionally held in the right hand only and you should hold it between the thumb and fingers. When communal chopsticks are supplied with shared plates of food, it is considered rude to eat using the communal chopsticks or use your own chopsticks to pick up the food from the shared plate. An exception to this rule is made among intimate family members. They may not mind the use of one's own chopsticks to transfer food.