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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(74):课外活动

发布时间:2015-01-29 14:54浏览次数:622
要求:
你校课外活动小组将举行一次英语讨论会,讨论关于学生看电视的问题。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈谈你的看法,如看电视获取信息便捷,可以了解世界、学习知识,但看多了影响视力,耽误学习等。
词数:100左右;
开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention,please?
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Boys and girls May I have your attention,please?Today our topic is watching TV.There is no doubt that Every coin has two sides.So watching TV has both advantages and disadvantages. First,we can get information as well as knowledge more conveniently through watching TV which helps us know about the world better.What's more,students can learn how to communicate with others,which can make a large difference in their whole lives.But watching too much TV may hurt our eyes.You know that more and more students are becoming eye-sighted.And there is no denying that if students spend too much time on TV,it will have a bad influence on their study. To sum up,we should watch TV in a proper way.

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