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Our world is multicultural, and taboo often belongs to the most delicate partof a culture. The communication among people from different nations and different cultures get more and more frequent and important with the development of economic globalization. When talking with foreigners, we are not only influenced by thedifferent language, but also disturbed by the different culture. Therefor, it is imperative to learn the taboo in diffenrent cultures to ensure a smooth and successful communication. At the same time, we can solve the misunderstanding embarassment when communicate with other people from other countries. .