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Taboos are practices or verbal expressions which are considered by a civilisationas improper or unpopular. Taboos often are rooted in the beliefs of the peoplefrom specific culture or region and are passed down from generation to generation.Usually, language is used as a mirror by people to reflect the national culture, andthe taboo likes an intangible discipline to restrain people's words and deeds. Anyignorance of cultural background may bring about offence, prejudice, even hostilityin cross-cultural communication. Thus, understanding different taboos betweenChinese and the west is benificial to improve the ability of intercultural communication.