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Taboos are practices or verbal expressions which are considered by a civilisation as improper or unpopular. Taboos often are rooted in the beliefs of the people from specific culture or region and are passed down from generation to generation.Usually, language is used as a mirror by people to reflect the national culture, and the taboo likes an intangible discipline to restrain people's words and deeds. Any ignorance of cultural background may bring about offence, prejudice, even hostility in cross-cultural communication. Thus, understanding different taboos between Chinese and the west is beneficial to improve the ability of intercultural communication.