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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8982[网页划词已开启]
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;作者能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但拼写方面要再接再厉;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As an old saying goes like that,it is unwise to judge a person solely by their appearance.It is common that we tend to be in a favor of the people who are beautiful,while have little affection for those who don't appeal to us.But we must have a deeper thought on this trendency. There is no denying the fact that we should not judge a book just from its cover.Firstly,a beautiful look doesn't gurantee a kind character as well.The good-looking individuals are usually praised and adored by others so they may concentrate on themselves too much and so ignore other people's feelings.On the contrary,people with an ordinary or even ugly apperance can be extremely attractive if you are willing to get closer and interact with them.On top of that,one's appearance is not equivalent to his or her inner space.Only when we spend time communicating with each other,can we come to know about a person. To sum up,I have to put it again that we should not attach too much importance to one's apperance especially when we are not very familiar with him.

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