文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
I have a good friend. My good is a shy girl. she has long straight hair. Her big eyes are charming. She is not tall as same as me. We always play together and we can talk every thing about each other. she likes study but I am not. So she always help with my homework.