熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;文中词汇丰富度要提高,也能较好的使用学术词汇;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Dialects Is Not Acceptable In Public Dialects exists many region in china,People use it to communicate with others,It is a traditional and regional language been a long history,But now with the development of society,All kinds of meeting are hold in our lives,So it is appropriate to use dialects in public places?As far as i am concerned,Ithink it is not appropriate to use dialects in public places. Fristly,If people use dialects in public places,it seems it is unpolite,Others people maybe think that you are talking about them or you are talking about a secret,So you leave a bad expression to others,In addition,We should be a quality person,We should learn how to respect others,We should show the personality as the new generation. In summary,Dialects is not acceptable in public,Wether you are in public or in private places,Just for respect others.