2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packing As we all know, with the development of socity, there are many phenomennon abuot excessive packing.The reason is that people always like something looks beautiful .Scendly,excessive packaging can catch people's eyes to sell.what is the most important is that now between quality and surface people would like to choice the latter. As my opinion,we can not just interest in something of surface . As for maker,excessive packaging can waste resource,we should against it.