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简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
With the fast development of society,the increasing pressure among all walks of life,whith bothers us a st of great deal.so keeping a good mood is essential. It's worthwhile to keeping a good mood. First of all, reduing some social pressure and enjoying a happy life are available. Moreover, there is no doubt that good moods lead to a high efficiency,which makes all the things finished effecyively and easily,and we can make a difference in that way.Most importantly,the one who keeps a good mood makes himself revitalized and confindent,as a result,he can make a good impressiont on others and achieve a good interpersonal relationship.maybe happiness is their own business to others. Nothing can delight you more than a good mood.It's the positive attitude that polish your life.without it we can hardly feel the sense of happiness,raise our work efficiency and so on.so why not?
