2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowadays, a majority of parents have only one chlid.So,they are very concern about their child's life.Furthermore, some parents do anything about them. With the developmnet of society,more and more company prefer to recruit those have good quality and ability.So,people should pay attention to calculate children. Leading them to be confidence and independent.So, what should parents do is let it go when your meet difficult.And then,don't give them too much money.The most importence is encourage them do smoething what they want to try.Though they fail themselves,parents have to tell them how to face failure. As a college,what I think is that we should try our best to become a confident,brave and indepent person.I believe we can do it well.