2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；能够使用一些不错的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Many successful people confirmed that nothing succeeds without a strong will in nowadays. If you want to succeed , that you must be pay a more attentions to your works and studies . Accordingly , people has a strong will that it could play a important role in your succeed roads . In our side , we see a plenty of things in this case , such as a working hard student and a stride worker . When we arrived in this world that the god arranged our to do ourselves tasks . Maybe only have a little of people can get an important task that they must be have a strong will . We are students now , as a student if we don't studying hard that we will become a useless man in the future , so if we have a strong will and with a lot of sweat that we will get close to succeed like many of successful persons . Accordingly , nothing succeeds without a strong will .