2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；作者词汇表达不够灵活，拼写错误比较多；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

computer and man Nowadays it seems that man gets involved with computer no mather life and work . More and more people get what they want from the internet. Man usually shoppings in the computer ,e-mail their friends instead of traditional writting.Family and friends comunicate face to face .What is going on the society .