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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者在句法层面做的很棒；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Many triumphant people confirmed that nothing succeeds without a strong will nowadays. If you want to succeed, that you must be pay a more attentions to your works and studies. Therefore, people has a strong will that it can play a essential role in the way to success） . In our side , we see a plenty of things in this case , such as a assiduous student and a hardworking people. The ability to do something over and over again in a short time may imply its easiness, but in a long run, a lifetime maybe, things turn out to be quite the opposite. Also, as is often the case, one may have obtained all the tools and opportunities to achieve something, but in the end they still fail due to the will shortage. We are students at present, as a student if we don't studying hard that we will become a useless man in the future .So if we have a strong will and put in our sweat a lot, we will get close to succeed like many successful people . To sum up , nothing succeeds without a strong will . As Emerson put it, no one can cheat you out of your ultimate success but yourself.
