2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Many triumphant people confirmed that nothing succeeds without a strong will nowadays. If you want to succeed, that you must be pay a more attentions to your works and studies. Therefore, people has a strong will that it can play a essential role in the way to success） . In our side , we see a plenty of things in this case , such as a assiduous student and a hardworking people. We are students at present, as a student if we don't studying hard that we will become a useless man in the future .So if we have a strong will and put in our sweat a lot, we will get close to succeed like many successful people . To sum up , nothing succeeds without a strong will . As Emerson put it, no one can cheat you out of your ultimate success but yourself.