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to be wise Just as an old chinese proverb says,it is unwise to make decise of you seen or listen. Put it another way,we should to be wise and not to make a decise easily. I will to be wise through the following ways.Firstly I will learn the skill of logical reasoning,I think only by this way can I improve my ability to make a decision corrtly.Secondly,when I come across the things whatever I seen or listen,I will face it immediately and assess it correctly.Thirdly,when I cannot face it,I will call my friends or parents around me. Only in a reasonable,heathly atmosphere can we hope to witness to make a correct decision.
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