文中使用了不错的从句,但需注意个别错误句子;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Do not make conclusion at first time People usually make conclusions and decisions immediately when they say or hear something.What's worse is our judgement often affected by our moods and surrounds,it's queit easily to do something wrong in daily life.So we should observe and anlysis what we say or hear carefully instead of making a conclusion just depend on its' appearance. Indeed,thing can not be trust when we touch them at first.Such as,with the develoment of advertises,enterpreneurs and films often use gorgeous advertisements to draw the customers' attentions and advocate them purchase their goods.However,some buyers were confused and cheat by their preach.As result,they often get the fake thing and take a sense of anger about these advertisements. Do not make conclusion and decision at first when we hear or say something
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