作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
with more and more information spread through all over the world ,we should treat them accurately. concluding a judge just in time is,in fact, for us,a unwise action . as far as i'm concerned ,there are some tips for it .on the one hand ,it is difficult for us to draw a conclusion merely from the facial question ,and though it could be ,by the lack of the necessary points ,wrongly concluded.on the other hand ,the fact is rather different from the essence .in another word ,we ought to reach an accurate decision based on the strong and many supported materials . in briefly ,we should not to make a rapid decision just we heard ,or,seen,which is a responsibility for us to stay calm and think it rationally .
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