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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加复合句的使用,注意个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Do not make conclusion at first time People usually make conclusions and decisions immediately when they say or hear something.What's worse is our judgement often affected by our moods and surrounds,it's queit easily to do something wrong in daily life.We should observe and analysis carefully which we say or hear instead of making a conclusion just depend on its' appearance. Indeed,thing can not be trust when we touch them at first.Such as,with the development of advertises,entrepreneurs and films often use gorgeous advertisements to draw the customers' attentions and advocate them purchase their goods.However,some buyers were confused and cheated by their preach.As result,they often get the fake thing and take a sense of anger about these advertisements. Do not make conclusion and decision at first when we hear or say something.

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