2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Judging from the table, we can see that people's income increases along with their education levels. Above all，the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates. The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders. Howeve, is it true that only a degree can ensure a bright future? I don't think so. Because,on the one hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can obtain from it instead of the degree itself. After all, an employer only pays for your ability and performance, not for your certificate. On the other hand, the most valuable bless high education brings to graduates is the ability to learn quickly and efficiently. People received more educations tend to keep life-long learning habits after their graduation, which would enable them to gain more opportunities in their career . In conclusion, what accounts for education pays is not the degree alone, but the graduate's ability and learning habit.