2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中词汇使用较丰富，学术词汇使用要加强；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；采用了一些简单的从句。

It's well know to us that the more you effort you did the easier you will successful. There are lots of temptation in our daily life,Thus you will lose heart to do everything.There is a typical example about my little brother.He was mad at computer games,What's more he was tired of studying. What we should do is that show him the right way and arrangement his time reasonable.Because if you want successful you must have the strong will and overcome the difficult what you have enjoyed. Throughout history it will be easy to find that every The Great Man with a strong will.They do everything is jump in and get their feet wet.They through many problems and deal with it one by one. As a student,I will face the same problem.All of us have a great dream,we have made some schedules for our dream.If you don't study hard, you will become a worker.There are limitless thing need you to finish.So from now on ,take your time and study hard.Have faith in yourself.