2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

简单句比重有点高且部分句子有错误；文中词汇表达丰富度要提升，可是单词拼写错误稍多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

as a chinese,i must adimited that，the tibet has been a holy city.and i imaged i will travilling in teh future. tibet is located in the west of china.if you going there you will feel a truly nature.however,you can study more skilles in danger. finlly, i sugesstion that my foreign friend could enjoy it ,wecomle to their