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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8984
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

It is widely accepted that appearance is important for people.What's more,people usually judge a person by their appearance.However,it is unwise to do that. A number of factors can account for the reason why it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance,but the following might be the criticals ones.First and foremost,it is very easily to cause brain waste that ignore the ability of people who have furtune inteligence but common even ugly appearance,such as in interview.Moreover,those who have a good looking might make fewer efforts than who don't have to access success.Undoubtedly,it will bring more and more unequal to the society. In my view,appearance is temporary and the inner is for a long time.To begin with,appearance is important.What's more,the inner is more important than appearance.In a word, it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.

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