高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport Playingn soccer is my favorite , I fell in love with it at accident ,I found a soccer ball on the way home,so then Iplayed it with my companies. The more I played it, the more I love it! From then on,I play soccer as much as possible,my idol is Back hame,I wish that I can be a professional football player