2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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In our modern life,it is pervasive for everyone to have mobile phones.With the development of the world,people often commitiuates with each other in mobile phone. With the Interent go into our life,the mobile phone has an important change in this time.And then the APP of moible phone has been meet with people,such as Wechat and QQ.From now on,people doesn't get rid of moible phone,because the mobile phone has deeply appeal to everyone that is why people The moible phone has advantage of fast,convenience and on time.But mobile phone like a coin,has the right side and the other side.For example,if people take their mobile phone for a long time that his arm and neck will be pain. To sum up,we must be make good use of our mobile phone.If we do that it will be make our life get better.