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I have a friend,he is my good friend.He is so tall and storang。small eyes ,small mouth and a beautifui face.Every teacher though he is a good student that stay very good.Every i have tourble,he will help me.For example,he teach me basketball football and tennis and so on.Become to her good friend is a good thing.